Question

8．你的好友Jane给你发来求助信，向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日心情不好，特别容易发脾气，正常的学习和生活受到了影响．请用英文给该同学写一封回信．内容要点如下：
1．表示理解：人人都会有不开心、发脾气的时候，不必太苦恼；
2．提出建议：可以向朋友或父母倾诉；锻炼排解郁闷；学会控制脾气，发脾气前保持沉默一会儿…

注意：
1．信的内容须包括所有要点，可适当发挥；
2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3．词数80左右，信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：worry苦恼； advice； keep silent保持沉默； lose one's temper 发脾气
Dear Jane，
I'm sorry to know that you're worried now．Everyone has             I hope you'll soon feel calm and become happy．
Yours，
Ann．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
Second，go outdoors and play sports with your friends．第二，和你的朋友一起去户外运动．
go outdoors 去户外
 play sth with sb 和某人一起玩
句型二：
Keep silent for a few minutes to make yourself calmer before you want to lose your temper next time．在你下次发脾气之前保持沉默几分钟，让自己平静下来．
Keep silent for a few minutes 保持沉默几分钟
make sb calmer使某人平静下来
lose one's temper发脾气

解答 Dear Jane，
I'm sorry to know that you're worried now．Everyone has this feeling sometimes，so you don't have to worry much．（人人都会有不开心、发脾气的时候，不必太苦恼）Here is my advice：
First，try to talk to someone，such as your parents or friends．（向朋友或父母倾诉）Maybe that can make you feel better．Second，go outdoors and play sports with your friends．【高分句型一】This way can help you become calm and relaxed．（锻炼排解郁闷）And third，learn to control your temper．Keep silent for a few minutes to make yourself calmer before you want to lose your temper next time．【高分句型二】（学会控制脾气）I hope you'll soon feel calm and become happy．（希望）
Yours，
Ann

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