Question

你的好友Tom邀请你本周末参加他的周末派对。假定你是陈蕾，请你回一封邮件，婉言拒绝他的邀请， 根据你的日程表说明原因，其中周六理由已给出，周日可作适当发挥。字数80字左右。

weekend schedule
Saturday	Sunday
Morning: have an English class prepare for the math test	Morning:……
Afternoon: go to the dentist	Afternoon:……
From:	ChenLei@162.com
Subject:	Sorry,but I'm not available.
Hi_____,
Thanks so much for your invitation. I'd love to come to the party, but…
yours,
________

Answer 1

Hi,Tom,
Thanks so much for your invitation. I'd love to come to the party, but I’m very sorry,I’m not available.On Saturday morning,I have an English class and I have to prepare for the math test.In the afternoon,I must go to the dentist.On Sunday morning,I have to clean my room and wash my clothes.In the afternoon,I must go shopping with my mother.I can take things for her.
yours,
Chen Lei

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如： Thanks so much for your invitation.非常感谢你的邀请，I'd love to come我愿意来，On Saturday morning 在星期六上午have an English class上一节英语课，prepare for the math test，In the afternoon在下午，go to the dentist去看牙医，go shopping with my mother和妈妈一起购物等,学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性、更富有条理。