| Problem Survey | |
| Problems | Numbers of students |
| Do badly in lessons. | 6 |
| Don't get on well with classmates. | 5 |
| Feel lonely at school. | 4 |
| Don't have much free time. | 3 |
| Become fat. | 2 |
分析 高分句型一:I think①this is②one of the biggest worries for us.我想这是对我们最大的担忧之一.
①I think后省略了由that引导的宾语从句.
②one of+最高级+名词复数"最…的之一"
高分句型二:The body needs food for energy,①but ②you'll become fat if you eat more than your body needs.身体需要有能量的食物,但如果你吃的比你身体需要的多的话,你会变得肥胖.
①but连接前后两个并列的分句,表语义的转折.
②if引导的条件状语从句,时态遵循"主将从现".
解答 One possible version:
I am Liu Qiang.I think it's not strange to have worries.Some students say they have become fat and that it really makes them feel bad about themselves.I think this is one of the biggest worries for us.【高分句型一】But I think we can do something about it.【指出烦恼-变胖】
First,you could eat less.The body needs food for energy,but you'll become fat if you eat more than your body needs.【高分句型二】If you eat less,the body can burn more calories than you eat.Second,do more exercise.Doing exercise can also help the body burn the calories and make you thinner.There are many ways to do exercise.For example,you could go to school on foot or by bike.【给出合理的建议】
Don't worry too much.I think you will become fit soon.
点评 结合命题作文的特点,首先要审好题,严格按照要求去组织文章,并抓住重点.要注意语句通顺、意思连贯.在阐述理想的原因的时候要恰当使用表示顺序的词,使这一部分很有条理.要善于运用好的句型如主语从句、动词不定式和倒装的使用等为文章增色,表达更流畅.要习惯用英语式的思维去组织句子,避免汉语式的英语.
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