Question

【题目】假如你有个朋友叫Jack，他由于长时间玩电脑游戏，坐姿不变，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰背酸痛，并且睡不好觉，白天上课犯困。请写一篇短文介绍一下他的情况，并向他提出你的建议。

要求：（1）内容包含所提供的信息，情节可适当发挥； （2）词数：80词左右。

参考词汇：play computer games; sit in the same way; sore eyes; feel tired; do eye exercises

Answer 1

【答案】Jack is my friend. He likes playing computer games very much. He often sits in the same way for too long without moving. Now he has a headache, sore eyes and a sore back. He doesn’t sleep well at night, so he feels tired every day in class. Sometimes he even sleeps in class.

I think he should take breaks away from the computer. He shouldn’t use the computer for a long time. He should do eye exercises to relax his eyes and go to bed early at night.

I think if he has a good rest, he will feel well soon.

【解析】本文介绍朋友Jack的情况，所以句子的主语应该用一般现在时，句子的主语用第三人称单数形式，要注意主谓一致，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，短文用了一些短语和句式，如：like playing computer games喜欢玩电脑游戏；has a headache头疼；at night在晚上；do eye exercises做眼睛保健操；has a good rest好好休息。用了if引导的条件状语从句，还有that引导的宾语从句，增加了文章的亮点。