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根据所给的两幅画，以“Wang Hai was ill”为题，至少写八句话，要求意思明确，内容必须符合题意，图片下方的单词供选用．

fall ill worry help

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学生：习作： Wang Hai Was Ill 　　Wang Hai was one of my classmates. He was also my neighbour. One day he fell ill and had been away from school for several days. Everyone in our class was worried about his study and healthy(X1). I decide(X2) to help him after school. 　　Lying in bed, Wang Hai was happy to see me. He asked me a lot of questions about our class. I was deep(X3) moved by his concern. 　　Under(X4) the help of my classmates and me. Wang Hai caught up with us at(X5) study soon after the illness. 　　剖析：1．“他的健康”应用名词health． 　　2．全文讲的都是过去的事，因此时态要一致，decide要改为decided． 　　3．“我被他的关心深深感动”应用副词修饰动词，因此deep应改为deeply． 　　4．“在……的帮助下”为固定短语“with the help of”，因此，要把Under改为With． 　　5．“在……方面赶上他人”应用“catch up with sb in sth”，所以文中的at要改为in． 　　总评：本文既描写了同学们对王海的关心，王海对同学们的牵挂，又反映了同学们互帮互助的友爱精神，是一篇主题突出、层次分明的好文章．