Question

学校来了一批美国交换生，班主任要求你向这些外国朋友们宣传和介绍扬州，请根据表格中的提示，以Beautiful Yangzhou 为题用英文写出你的介绍内容。

扬州简介	位于长江北岸，气候宜人，城市干净，交通便利。
扬州特色	1. 扬州园林风格独特 2. 扬州美食闻名于世 3. 扬州…
美好祝愿	…

 
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                            
                    

Answer 1

Beautiful Yangzhou
Hi, everybody! Welcome to Yangzhou. Now, l’d like to introduce this beautiful city to you.
Yangzhou is one of the most beautiful cities in Jiangsu province. It’s popular in China not only because of it’s convenient traffic, but also the pleasant weather since it lies on the north bank of Yangzi River.
Yangzhou is also  famous for lots of own styles :  the gardens in Yangzhou are quite different from those in other places. Ge garden, He garden attract people all over the word .  the delicious food such as Yangzhou fried rice, Fuchun Baozi ,Lion head ( meat ball) are unforgettable if you test once, a lot of ancient buildings show that Yangzhou is also a city with long and cultural history .
If you want to know more about the city, Walk around and experience its beauty by yourselves. Wish you good luck and enjoy yourselves in Yangzhou!

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求写一篇介绍扬州的短文。题目中给出的材料较为详细，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，注意文后要适当表达自己的感想。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要是一般现在时态，注意时态与时间状语的搭配问题。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误，写好后多读多修改。