Question

8．母爱情深，父爱无价，师恩无限，友情可贵．在生活中，有许多值得感恩的人，请以Love for ______ 为题，写一篇短文．
要求：1．请将题目补充完整．
2．用80-120词写一篇完整的短文．描述你所感恩的人；感恩的原因并列举感恩的事例；你将为他/她做些什么来表达你的感激之情．
提示：1．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2．短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名及其他相关真实信息．
3．凡照抄本试卷里的文章段落，一律不得分．
Love formy mother
We need love，we also need to love others．The person I love most is my mother．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．Shi is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
She bought ①whatever I needed for my study，②even though she didn't have much money．即使她没有足够的钱，她给我买任何我需要的学习用品．
①whatever无论什么．引导的宾语从句，作为buy的宾语．
②even though引导的让步状语从句．
【高分句型二】
I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．我会存钱给他买新衣服让她看起来仍然年轻．
that make her look still young是一定语从句，修饰先行词clothes，关系词that作为定语从句的主语，不可省略．

解答 Love for my mother
We need love，we also need to love others．The person I love most is my mother．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．She is quiet．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．（介绍）
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．【高分句型一】She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．（她为我做的事）
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young．【高分句型二】I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think．（我将会为她做什么）

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．