Question

书面表达：（20分）

很多同学都有出游的经历，有些可能是有趣的，有些是惊险的，而有些却是发人深省的，请以“A/An...Experience”为题，描述你在出游中遇到的一次难忘的小插曲。内容提示：When and where did it happen? What happened? Why was it so unforgettable?（难忘的）

要求：1.中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范 2.词数不少于80。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

An Unforgettable Experience

Last Sunday I went to visit the Great Wall with my friends. We went there by bus. It was hot and windy that day. There were thousands of people. When we saw a group of foreigners. We went up and talked with them. We told them lots of history of the Great Wall and the Chinese culture. They were very surprised when they saw that our English were excellent. They were also very interested in the Chinese culture. They thanked us a lot and we really had a good time. We felt proud of ourselves and being Chinese. I will remember this experience forever.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求我们以An Unforgettable Experience为题写一篇短文。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲，主要包括：一、When and where did it happen?二、What happened?三、Why was it so unforgettable? 写作提纲虽然已经给出，但是很多其他内容都需要我们自己去充实，让它变得完整、合理，内容丰富，这就需要花费我们的想象力，以及我们平时积累的知识。另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据写作提纲,讲述了自己难忘的经历。层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错。如There were thousands of people. We felt proud of ourselves and being Chinese.等。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如They were also very interested in the Chinese culture.等。

考点：提纲类作文。