Question

【题目】据报道，重庆将探索逐渐取消中考。为此，某外国语学校拟在校内新开设一部分选修课程以提升学生的综合素质。现校学生会面向广大学生征集意见。假设你叫王华，请你以“If I can add one more course”为话题，写一篇建议稿, 谈谈自己所希望增设的课程。

要点提示：

1. 你希望增设哪门课程？ 2. 为什么选择这门课程？ 3. 你希望从中学到什么？

（你可以从下列课程中任选一门，或者自选一门完成写作：

烹饪：cooking 手工：handcrafting 表演：acting

园艺：gardening 音乐欣赏：music appreciation ……）

要求：

1. 词数：80词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

Dear Student Union,

I’m very glad that our school will offer some new courses. If I can add one more course, I would like to choose

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Thank you!

Yours,

Wang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Student Union,

I’m very glad that our school will offer some new courses. If I can add one more course, I would like to choose cooking.

That is because I can’t cook at all. When I come back home from school, I just sit at the table and wait for dinner. My parents always cook for me. I never think about whether they are tired or not.

If I can learn some cooking skills at school, I can also make delicious food for my parents especially when they are tired from work. So I want to learn how to make dumplings, zongzi, salad and many other different kinds of food. I hope our school can add cooking.

Thank you!

Yours,

Wang Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。