Question

【题目】.书面表达:

请根据以下表格中的信息对你最好的朋友Tommy进行介绍。

姓名	Tommy	学校班级	阳光中学七年级二班
外貌特征	高高壮壮，短头发, 他戴一副眼镜。
兴趣爱好	足球踢得很好，周三下午和好朋友们踢足球。
学校情况	他住得离学校近，每天步行上学。老师们对他很好，下课后他经常和同学谈论足球比赛，在学校很开心。

要求：1、根据表中的所给英语要点，不要逐字翻译。

2、意思连贯，语言通顺，语法正确，主题明确。

3、字数：60词左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)

阳光中学 Sunshine Middle School.

This is my friend Tommy

Tommy is my best friend.

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Answer 1

【答案】

This is my friend Tommy

Tommy is my best friend. He is from Class Two, Grade Seven, Sunshine Middle School He is tall and strong. and he has short hair.He often wears glasses.

He plays football very well. He often plays on Wednesday morning with his friends. They play very happily every time.

He walks to school every day because his home is near the school. At school, he gets on well with everyone. The teachers are good to him and after class he often talks to classmates about football matches. He feels very happy at school.

He is also helpful. he often helps us with our homework. we all like him

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文。给出的材料比较详细，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容全面，语句通顺，能完成习作的预期目的。在习作中用到了多个复合句，如：He walks to school every day because his home is near the school.能根据内容做适当的发挥：At school, he gets on well with everyone.这使短文更有逻辑性。