Question

假如你是Mike，你的朋友Susan近来心情不好，请你给她发一封E-mail，提出合理性的建议，帮助她调适心情。
字数：80—100字（首尾句已给出，不记入所要求的总字数）。
供你参考的建议有：
sing, take a walk, do sports, write the diary, watch TV, listen to music, go shopping, go swimming, go outside…
Dear Susan,
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Yours
Mike

Answer 1

Dear Susan,
When you are not feeling well, the following suggestions may be suitable for you:
1. Go outside! Do something active. For example, take a walk, go swimming, or just lie on the grass and watch clouds pass.
2. Do something you’re good at! If you love to sing, then go to turn on some music and sing loudly!
3. Start a diary. Write down your thoughts, dreams, problems or anything you want!
In all, if you want to feel well about yourself, you must believe in yourself！
Best wishes!
Yours  
Mike

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，题目中给出的材料较为简略。动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。写作中注意针对苏珊的问题提出自己的建议，不要遗漏要点。写作中注意使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
点评：此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。