Question

根据提示,以“My Best Friend and I”为题写一篇短文,比较你俩的特征,至少80字。

提示: 1.我的好友名叫琳达;

2.在某些方面,我们看上去一样;在某些方面,我们看起来不同;

3.我们都有黑眼睛,黑头发;

4.她比我高,比我文静,很认真;

5.我外向一点,而且比她风趣;

6.都喜欢读书。

My Best Friend and I

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My Best Friend and I

?? I have a good friend. Her name is Linda. In some ways we look the same. But in other ways we are different. We both have black eyes and black hair. She is taller and quieter than me. She is very careful. I’m a little more outgoing than her. I am also funnier than her. We both like reading. She is good at English. But I am good at Chinese.? We often help each other.
【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我和我的朋友。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：My /Her name is……，be good at及do well in等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达自己的交友意愿。。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字，接下来介绍我们的共同点与不同之处，最后指出我们的擅长。此处用了 In some ways，a little more outgoing than，is good at ，am good at等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。