Question

书面表达
古城扬州吸引了越来越多的国内外游客，假设你是小明，今天你带领北京老师们进行了扬州一日游。请根据下列表格内容，以“A day trip to Yangzhou”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。

时间	地   点	活   动
上午	瘦西湖   the Slender West Lake	欣赏美景、划船、拍照；玩得很开心
中午	富春茶社 Fuchun Tea House	品尝当地传统食品；最喜欢小吃(snack)
下午	大明寺Daming Temple	了解历史
晚上	双东街区the Traditional Double-dong Blocks	购物，为朋友买纪念品；
感受	至少两点

 

Answer 1

day trip to Yangzhou
Today, I showed the teachers from Beijing around our city Yangzhou. Yangzhou is a beautiful city with a long history. The weather here is quite different from that in Beijing. And it’s warm and comfortable all year round.
In the morning, we went to the Slender West Lake. We enjoyed beautiful view, went boating, took photos and all of us had a good time. At noon, We came to Fuchun Tea House, we tasted local traditional food and had our favorite snacks. In the afternoon, we went to Daming Temple to learn the history of Yangzhou. At night, we went shopping in the Traditional Double-dong Blocks. The teachers from Beijing bought a lot of souvenirs for their friends.
After a day’s trip, I felt very tired but I felt very happy. Because I introduced our city to the friends from Beijing. They like Yangzhou very much and think it’s a good place to live in. I am very happy to hear that.

试题分析：本文的写作极具介绍地方相关作文的写作典型。首先，对扬州的总体情况进行说明，如历史悠久，天气情况等with a long history. The weather here is quite different from that in Beijing.然后，对上午，中午，下午和晚上分别所做的事情进行陈述，写作过程中可以按照时间顺序进行描写。最后表达自己的感受，首先可以说自己累但是同时也很快乐I felt very tired but I felt very happy，其次可以从我为北京的朋友介绍了扬州，他们非常喜欢我自己也感到很高兴来进行进一步的表达I am very happy to hear that.
点评：在对于诸如此类文章的写作，学生要注意变换句式，可以多使用高级词汇和多变换句式。学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常用的表达。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，同时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，这样文章才能写出新意，写出文采。