Question

My hometown is a pretty city，so people there are    
kind and  polite. With coming of spring，grass and 　　　    
trees turn green，and flowers grew in many colors.　         
In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more　       
beautiful. After autumn arrives，the city looks as an 　      
old man with leaves fallen from the trees. In winter，　     
a lot of white birds come to my city for food. I　can　      
wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long　　　     
time. While they find fish come to the surface, they　　     
fly down immediate and catch them without delay.             
That is my city, and I love it so much.

Answer 1

【小题1】so改为and 
【小题2】With后加the
【小题3】grew改为grow
【小题4】skies改为sky
【小题5】as改为like
【小题6】fallen改为falling
【小题7】I改为They
【小题8】more改为much
【小题9】While改为When
【小题10】immediate改为immediately

解析【小题1】根据上下句的关系应用and表示顺承。
【小题2】此处特指即将到来的春天。
【小题3】根据行文需要，此处应用一般现在时。
【小题4】sky无复数形式。
【小题5】表示“看上去像……”应用look like。
【小题6】表示“正在落下的”应用falling。
【小题7】指代前文的birds用复数。
【小题8】此处没有比较的意思，不用more。
【小题9】表示“当……时”用When。
【小题10】修饰动词短语ny down应用副词。