Question

1．最近校园欺凌事件再次成为舆论焦点，你们班也开展了相关讨论．请根据以下要点以"Say NO to School-bullying"为题，为学校网站写一篇英语文章，内容包括：
1．欺凌行为的危害；
2．提出至少两条建议，号召一起努力阻止校园暴力．
注意：1．内容包括以上要点，可适当增加细节；
2．词数100左右．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息最近校园欺凌事件再次成为舆论焦点，你们班也开展了相关讨论．请根据以下要点以"Say NO to School-bullying"为题，为学校网站写一篇英语文章，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：欺凌行为的危害；提出至少两条建议，号召一起努力阻止校园暴力． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：First of all首先；try every effort to 努力去做；drop out of 辍学；answer violence with violence以暴制暴；deal with应对，处理；More importantly更重要的是；pay more attention to更多关注；All in all总之；keep away from远离
Our class had a heated discussion and we have reached some agreements on how to solve the problem．（高分句型一）
First of all，we should try every effort to prevent school-bullying happening for more and more students would drop out of school if their personal safely could not be guaranteed．（高分句型二）
More importantly，the whole society should pay more attention to both physical and mental health of adolescents．（高分句型三）

解答 Recently，school-bullying is a hot topic again．Students showed their fear and parents and teachers also expressed their great concern about it．Our class had a heated discussion and we have reached some agreements on how to solve the problem．（高分句型一）
       First of all，we should try every effort to prevent school-bullying happening for more and more students would drop out of school if their personal safely could not be guaranteed．（高分句型二）Next，if we meet with school-bulling，we should not answer violence with violence，because it will result in more fighting．（欺凌行为的危害）Instead，we should tell our teachers or parents about it．They will help us deal with it well and protect us from the bad guys．More importantly，the whole society should pay more attention to both physical and mental health of adolescents．（高分句型三）（建议）
       All in all，every student should behave himself and keep away from school-bullying．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．