Question

假如你是Li Hua，担任学生会主席， 我校刚在10月10日举行完首届校园外语节，请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英语稿，投递到英文报，The 21^st Century。

     目    的：  为了丰富校园生活，提高同学们学习外语的积极性，校学生会特举办首届校园外语节。

     参赛形式：   以班级为单位参加。

     活动内容：   英文演讲，英文歌曲和英语短剧比赛。

     活动裁判：   本校英语教师和外教。

     活动影响：   增强了学生学习英语的兴趣等。

     参考词汇：  Foreign Language Festival, English Speech Contest, English Playlets Competition

     注意：  词数100左右；信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。

Editor，

    On Oct.10^th, our school held the first Foreign Language Festival…. …

                                                          Yours sincerely,

                                                              Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Editor,

 On Oct.10^th,our school held the first Foreign Language Festival.It aimed to make campus life more colourful as well as to encourge students to study English.

     There were three activities during this festival—English Speech Contest,English Songs and English Playlets Competition. Each contestant from all the classes took part in them actively. And the judges consisted of our English teachers and foreign teachers.

      As the chairman of the Students’ Union, I was completely involved in the festival. In my opinion, this festival has been successfully organized. Also, the atmosphere of learning English has been well constructed. Moreover, it has effectively raised our awareness of cross-culture and teamwork. I hope such activities will be regularly held then.

                                                   Yours sincerely,

                                                        Li Hua   

【解析】本文是一篇稿子，首先要看清楚要求，外语节已经过了，所以是太一定要用过去时，不能用将来时；另外，不要逐句翻译，可以用连词或从句来表示几个要点，可适当增加自己举办这个外语节的感受以及表达自己的希望。