Question

19．假设你是高二学生李华，得知某英文报招聘一名兼职记者，请根据以下要点写一封自荐信申请得到这个职位．主要内容包括：
1．写信目的；
2．申请理由（语言优势，性格优点，相关经历…）；
3．希望获准．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯并注意语言的得体性．
Dear Sir or Madam，
I am a middle school student in Grade Two．I'm glad to learn that you want a part-time English reporter．I am writing to introduce myself．
I am confident that I am the right person you are looking for．（高分句型一）First，I have a good command of the English language．I've been learning English for 10 years，and I do well in both speaking and writing．（高分句型二）Besides，I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others．（高分句型三）Above all，I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station．
I am sure I have the qualifications for the position．I would be grateful if you could offer me the chance．
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是高二学生李华，得知某英文报招聘一名兼职记者，请根据以下要点写一封自荐信申请得到这个职位，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：写信目的；申请理由（语言优势，性格优点，相关经历…）；希望获准．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：look for寻找；have a good command of精通；Besides另外；get along with 与…相处；do well in在…方面做得好；Above all最重要的是；Look forward to盼望；
I am confident that I am the right person you are looking for．（高分句型一）
I've been learning English for 10 years，and I do well in both speaking and writing．（高分句型二）
Besides，I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I am a middle school student in Grade Two．I'm glad to learn that you want a part-time English reporter．I am writing to introduce myself．
       I am confident that I am the right person you are looking for．（高分句型一）First，I have a good command of the English language．I've been learning English for 10 years，and I do well in both speaking and writing．（高分句型二）Besides，I'm easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others．（高分句型三）Above all，I once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station．
       I am sure I have the qualifications for the position．I would be grateful if you could offer me the chance．
       Looking forward to your reply!
                                                                                                                                          Yours，
                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．