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5.随着现代社会的飞速发展,越来越多的人喜欢网上购物(shopping online).请你根据表格提示的信息点,以"The advangtages and disadvantages of online shopping"为题,写一篇短文,说明网购的优点和缺点,并发表自己的观点.
1.语言连贯,句式规范,字迹工整.
2.100--120词左右.
3.要点齐全.
4.参考词汇  1.商品 goods  2.退货 return the goods
优点缺点你的观点
1.不出门就可以逛商店
2.买到当地没有的商品
3.价格低
1.有时实物和图片相差很大
2.衣服不能试穿
3.退货不方便
 

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文,根据提示信息以"The advangtages and disadvantages of online shopping"为题,写一篇短文,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:分别从网购的优点、缺点及自己的观点三个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架,要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:it is convenient to do sth做…是非常方便的;besides另外;however然而;in my opinion以我的观点来看;People who like it say it is more convenient to online shopping.(高分句型一)
 Second,the Intent can help people get the goods not available in the place where they live.(高分句型二)
In my opinion,though online shopping has weaknesses,it will replace traditional shopping soon.(高分句型三)

解答 The advantages and disadvantages of online shopping
    Nowadays,online shopping has become increasingly popular.
    People who like it say it is more convenient to online shopping.(高分句型一)First,people can shop without leaving their home.Second,the Intent can help people get the goods not available in the place where they live.(高分句型二) Besides,online prices are usually lower.(网购优点)
    However,some people have opposite opinions.First,the goods people get sometimes differ a lot from the pictures on the Intent.Second,people can't try on the clothes.In addition,the goods can't be exchanged easily.(网购缺点)
    In my opinion,though online shopping has weaknesses,it will replace traditional shopping soon.(高分句型三)(自己观点)

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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