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错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改
收录时间:2021-04-08    答题:高一英语(宓老师)

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street.

So I had to move apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His new apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.

【答案】

【解析】本文主要讲了上周,作者去拜访自己以前的邻居的故事。

1.第一处:去掉第二个to  visit作"拜访,访问" 讲时,是及物动词。

2.第二处:living→ live  used to do sth.意思是"曾经做某事(但现在停止)" ;注意区分be used to (doing) sth.该短语意思是"习惯于(做)某事"。

3.第三处:which→ that   that引导同位语从句,说明an order的内容。

4.第四处:were→ was  在从句中,主语the old building是单数,谓语动词仍用单数。注意along with不是并列连词,所以它引导的短语不能被看作并列成分。

5.第五处:I→ We  人称代词的逻辑错误。根据语境,这里指我们(我和住了多年的邻居)分开了。

6.第六处:big→ bigger  than before提示上文应使用比较级。

7.第七处:took→ takes  "去市区要花费相当长的时间"是杨先生的现状,故表语从句也要使用一般现在时。

8.第八处:Therefore→ However  根据语境,上下文之间构成转折关系,并非因果关系,故应改为副词however。注意连词but通常不用逗号隔开。

9.第九处:that后加a  new subway line前需加不定冠词a,泛指"一条新的地铁线"。

10.第十处:year→ years  a few(一些)修饰可数名词复数。