分析 这是一篇提纲作文.内容是写一封申请函信,申请加入公益人才培训班的培训课程.时态主要为一般现在时.人称主要为第一人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:
1你能参加公益活动的时间;
2.你参加公益活动的原因;
3.你能胜任什么类型的活动.
常用到的重点短语:
would like to do sth 想要做某事
join sb 加入某人的行列
in need 处于危急中
help sb with sth 帮助某人做某事
chat with sb 与某人聊天
【高分句型】
1.I would like to join you①because②it is meaningful to help people ③in need.
①because引导的原因状语从句.
②it is+adj+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的,it是形式主语,动词不定式做真正主语.
③in need处于危急中,做后置定语,修饰people.
2.Just as the saying goes,"Fragrance remains in the hand that gives roses."
谚语的引用.Fragrance remains in the hand that gives roses.赠人玫瑰,手留余香.
解答 One possible version:
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to join Nanjing C Foundation to be a voluntary worker.
First,let me introduce myself.I am a Grade 9 student at Nanjing School.As a student,I am very busy,but I can do some voluntary work at weekends.I am free on Sunday afternoons.(能参加公益活动的时间)
I would like to join you because it is meaningful to help people in need.【高分句型】Just as the saying goes,"Fragrance remains in the hand that gives roses."【高分句型】I will also be happy if I can be of some help to others.(参加公益活动的原因)
I can help primary school students with their homework.I can also chat with the elderly and help them do some housework.(能胜任什么类型的活动)
I will be very happy if I can be a member of you.You can email me at Sam@Nanjing School.com.
Yours sincerely
Sam
点评 这是一篇给材料作文,本文已经给出了主要写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥.写作中,应注意描述的全面性,尽量将提示的内容利用上.语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯.适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.
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