Question

【题目】书面表达

最近，社会上在热议已由全国人大立法通过的新的国家计划生育政策，即俗称的 “二孩政策”（second-child policy）。假设学校本周“英语角”将以此为话题展开讨论，请你用英语写一篇短文作为讨论稿，阐述你的观点。

要求：1. 词数80-100左右。 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)

2. 表明你的观点（赞同或反对），至少说明两点理由。

3. 语句连贯，语法正确，书写工整。

Recently, the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, the government announced that all parents would be allowed to have a second child. Some students object to the new policy. They think the coming little sister or brother will share the love from their common parents. And they will not get what they want so easily as before. The little sister or brother may also affect present quiet life, even the study.

Some students say they welcome the new policy. They think it will give more happiness to the family. There will be more people to communicate with and more brothers or sisters to look after the old of the family.

I agree on the second opinion. And I can’t wait for a new baby in my family. I believe he or she can bring many surprises to us. (116 words)

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇图表类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。

写作亮点：章结构完整，表达清晰，用了很多比较复杂的词汇和句子。例如：They think the coming little sister or brother will share the love from their common parents;They think it will give more happiness to the family.使文章结构更清晰明了。