根据所给的两幅图,以“Let Us Help You”为题,至少写八句话,要求意确,内容必须符合题意,图片下方的单词供选用.
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学生:习作: Let Us Help You It was getting dark. All the boys were tired and ready to leave the football und. Suddenly Li Lei found a granny standing worried(X1) under a tree as if she was king for something. He came up to her and asked what was the matter. “ I've lost my key of(X2) the room.” the granny said sadly.“ Don't worry,” Li Lei said, “Let us help you.”Suddenly Li Lei found the key lie(X3) at the foot of another tree and gave it to the granny. When the granny wanted to thank these boys, they had already away(X4). 剖析: 1.stand是动词,应用副词修饰,所以worried要改为worriedly.2.“……的钥匙”是固定结构,用“the key to…”,所以文中的介词of要改为to. 3.那时钥匙放在树脚下,放应用lying. 4.此句缺少谓语动词,“away”前应加上“been或gone”. 剖析:文章一开始,作者交待了故事发生的时间和地点,就马上进入了主要细节的描述.在描写老太太的举止神态时,几句话就把起因表达得一清二楚,随后作者用对话形式展开叙述,使文章有静有动,有声有色. |
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