Question

【题目】语篇表达（共15分）

“百善孝为先”，“身教胜于言传”。请根据所提供的信息与提示词，以“What my father does moves me deeply!”为题，用英语写一篇短文。

内容要点：

1. 奶奶把爸爸抚养大不容易，现在年龄大了，很需要照顾；

2. 爸爸是个孝顺的儿子。无论他多忙，他……；

3. 孝敬老人是中华民族的传统美德，爸爸所做的为我树立了好榜样；

4. 我要向爸爸学习，并尽我所能和家人一起分担家务。

提示词：raise(抚养)，filial(孝顺的)，set an example to(为……树立榜样)，virtue(美德)，respecting elderly people(孝敬老人)

写作要求：

1.短文必须陈述以上四个方面的内容，其中第二方面至少写出体现父亲孝心的三件事；

2. 所给的提示词都必须用上（可适当发挥），词数不少于80词（不含已给出的句子的词数）；

3. 短文中不得出现真空的姓名、校名和地名；

4. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。

What my father does moves me deeply

Look at the picture, my father is washing feet for my grandma. What my father is doing moves me very much. Yes, it’s not easy

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Answer 1

【答案】

What my father does moves me deeply

Look at the picture, my father is washing feet for my grandma. What my father is doing moves me very much.

Yes, it’s not easy for my grandma to raise my father and now she is too old to look after herself. My father is a filial son. No matter how busy he is, he always spends some time with my grandma every day. He usually talks with my grandma, helps her do some chores and helps her wash feet every evening.

Respecting elderly people is virtue of Chinese and my father sets an example to me. I will learn from my father and try as possibly as I can to share housework with my family.

【解析】

试题分析：本题要求根据所提示的内容要点，结合图片上的信息及词语提示，以“What my father does moves me deeply”（父亲的行为深深地感动了我）为题，以“百善孝为先”，“身教胜于言传”为主题进行写作。短文重点写爸爸如何当好孝顺的儿子，如何树立好的榜样以突出主题。短文用一般现在时态，第一、三人称形式。

写作亮点：短文开头从看图着笔，直奔主题：What my father is doing moves me very much.父亲的行为使我深受感动。第二段先写奶奶的不易，再写父亲是如何地孝顺。条理清晰，层次清楚。其中的too…to…,no matter how等等结构用得很好。第三段点明主题，孝敬老人是中华民族的传统美德，我要向爸爸学习。中心突出，主题鲜明。