分析 这是一篇提纲作文.以"Keep our school clean"为题,写一篇与保护学校环境有关的短文.时态以一般现在时为主,人称主要是第一人称.
写作思路:考生需要首先审清主题,围绕主题展开作文.其次考生可从五方面展开作文,即本文的写作要点:1 学校环境越来越差;
2 随地吐痰和乱扔垃圾;
3 毁坏花草树木;
4 多植树,循环使用教材;
5 保护学校环境.
重点短语:
越来越差worse and worse
首先first of all
乱扔垃圾throw rubbish everywhere
保护环境protect the environment
我们的义务 our duty
高分句型:
1.It's also students'dream to live in a clean and beautiful school.住在一个干净美丽的学校里面是学生的梦想.
It's+名词+to do"做某事"是…
2.It will make our school so dirty.这会让我们的学校很脏.
make+宾语+宾语补足语(形容词)
3.We'd better protect the trees,flowers and the grass 我们最好保护树、花儿和小草.
had better do 最好做某事(提建议句式)
解答 Keep our school clean
We all know that everyone wants to live in a clean place,it's also students'dream to live in a clean and beautiful school(高分句型).But the environment in our school is becoming worse and worse (学校环境越来越差).
I think we should start from ourselves.First of all,I think we shouldn't spit,it's very dirty and unhealthy for ourselves.And we can't throw rubbish everywhere,it will make our school so dirty(高分句型) (不要随地吐痰,乱扔垃圾).Secondly,we'd better protect the trees,flowers and the grass(高分句型).Our school will look more beautiful if the plants grow well (不要毁坏花草树木).Thirdly we should plant more trees and recycle textbooks(多植树,使用循环教材).
We should do something to protect the environment.(保护环境)It's our duty to keep the school clean.I believe our school will be more beautiful and cleaner!
点评 以提纲提供情景的作文.要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性,就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题,但要注意,文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点.行文间要注意简化描述,用简短的语句代替冗长的语句.在作文完成的时候,应该检查、修改,以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节.写作时,要先确定好时态,再注意谓语动词形式的变化.另外,还需要使用一些句型和短语,使整篇短文意思连贯,表达流畅.
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