Question

【题目】书面表达

所有生物都是地球的主人，人与动物共享同一家园。假如你是Jack，请你根据以下思维导图，以One Earth, One Home为题写一篇演讲稿，在学校“2017年度英语节”活动中作专题演讲。

注意：1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，段落分明，书写工整。

2. 文章必须包括思维导图所提供的信息，并作适当的发挥。

3. 词数90个词左右。

4. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。

Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report. My topic is “One Earth, One Home”. _______________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you very much!

Answer 1

【答案】One Earth, One Home

Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a report. My topic is “One Earth, One Home”.

I think that we should share the same home with other living things. But in fact, there are many unsatisfying problems in our society. People often cut down trees and forests and hunt animals for money. Thus they make more space for farms and buildings instead of animals. As a result, many natural disasters happen every year.

So I advise that we should take some actions to protect our earth and animals. At first, our government should make laws to protect the environment and animals. And then, we students are supposed to educate more people to realize the importance of protecting earth and loving the animals.

If we do this, our earth will become comfortable for us to live in and the animals can live peacefully as they wish. But if we don’t, everything will beyond our imagination. So let’s act together to make a more beautiful home for us human and animals as well.

That’s all. Thank you very much!

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇图表作文。要求按照所给的题目结合思维导图的内容完成这篇演讲稿，我们要用热情洋溢的语言把所列举的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含你个人的观点、现在存在的问题、解决的办法以及其重要性等。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，人称主要是第一人称，注意并列连词的使用及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文的过渡，符合逻辑关系。

亮点说明：这篇短文详细、全面地描述了演讲稿的内容，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。语言铿锵有力、有说服力；其中使用了一些复杂句式和短语，包含状语从句的准确使用为文章增色不少。如Thus they make more space for farms and buildings instead of animals，And then, we students are supposed to educate more people to realize the importance of protecting earth and loving the animals.学习中再注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。