Question

请根据下面表格中提供的信息，向同学们介绍你的新朋友 Henry.

Name	Henry
Age	14
Look	Tall, medium build, short curly hair, wear glasses
Hobby	Soccer
Favorite animals	Monkeys

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I have a new friend. His name is Henry. He is 14 years old. He is tall and of medium build. He has short curly hair. And he likes reading. But he always wears glasses when he reads. He also likes sports and he plays soccer very well. His favorite animals are monkeys because they are smart and lovely. And his favorite food is vegetables because they are healthy. I like him very much.

【解析】

试题分析：本文的写作不难，把握好介绍的条理性。首先用简单的语言表达我的好朋友的名字、年龄、身材tall and of medium build.进而对卷曲的头发和常戴着眼镜看书进行描写he always wears glasses when he reads.，然后对他最喜欢的体育运动sports and he plays soccer very well和动物His favorite animals are monkeys because they are smart and lovely及最喜欢的食物his favorite food is vegetables because they are healthy进行介绍，并进行适当的发挥，说明原因，最后一句话进行总结I like him very much.

考点：提纲类写作

点评：本文难度不大，写作条理性要把握好，对于初一的作文，不要求有很华美的词语，重在培养自己连词成句的能力，避免中式英文。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患。