Question

【题目】书面表达。

2014年起，连云港市政府为解决本市居民出行的“最后一公里”问题，逐步投入公共自行车，这是便民、环保的一个有力举措。截至2015年4月，城市主干道、BRT站、小区等多处已全方位配套此设施。作为中学生，你要推广公共自行车的好处，让更多的人知道政府此举的重要性，呼吁人们少开车，多骑行，保护环境。

要点如下：

1. 骑公共自行车出行方便，可以随时租还。

2. 缓解交通拥挤，不仅省时间，还省钱。

3. 可以健身，减肥。

4. 欣赏沿途风光，心情好。

5. 你的呼吁……（至少2句）

要求：1.短文必须包含所有要点，适当发挥，行文要连贯。

2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Now, public bikes are widely used in Lianyungang. I think it’s a good thing.

请同学们认真思考，仔细答题，加油！

Answer 1

【答案】Now, public bikes are widely used in Lianyungang. I think it’s a good thing.

It is convenient to ride a public bicycle. It can be rented at any time. Riding a public bicycle can ease traffic congestion. It saves not only time, but also money. Riding a public bicycle is good for our health, and weight loss. We can enjoy the scenery along the way, and we have good mood. I think we should ride public bicycles as much as possible. We should drive cars as little as possible. If we do that, we should protect our environment.

【解析】本篇作文叫小作者推广公共自行车的好处，让更多的人知道政府此举的重要性，呼吁人们少开车，多骑行，保护环境。小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如Riding a public bicycle is good for our health and weight loss. We can enjoy the scenery along the way, and we have good mood. I think we should ride public bicycles as much as possible.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。