Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你校英语报一月份将开展“校园之星”(Star of the Campus)评选活动，请你根据图中的信息，向校英语报写一篇短文，介绍你心目中“校园之星”李华的情况。

提示词：help…with, spare time, get along with, do housework

要求：

1．文章内容符合题意，可参考所给提示词；

2．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；

3．词数100左右(文章首段已给出，不计人总词数)。

Our school will select(挑选)“Star of the Campus(校园)”in January. I think Li Hua is the most suitable one.

Answer 1

【答案】

Our school will select (挑选)“Star of the Campus (校园)”in January. I think Li Hua is the most suitable one．

At school, Li Hua studies very hard at his lessons, so he is always one of the top students in our class. He also love sports. He often plays soccer at weekends with his friends. What’s more, he cares for other students, and he always helps them with their lessons after class.

At home, he likes helping his mother do housework in his spare time. Besides, Li Hua gets along well with his neighbors. This is why Li Hua is so popular.

In short, Li Hua is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in need. He sets a good example for us.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文，图片中呈现的是李华在日常生活中所做的不同的事情，写作前要认真阅读图片信息，选择合适的短语来表达，在时态的运用上，要使用一般现在时态。主语为第三人称，并注意主谓一致，可适当使用连词，使文章更流畅。

写作亮点：文章简单介绍了李华在日常生活中所做的不同的事情。时态及动词短语的把握上非常到位。So, What’s more, Besides, In short 的使用，使文章语意连贯，条理清晰。最后一句总结In short, Li Hua is an excellent student and he is always ready to help others in need. He sets a good example for us.增加了文章的感情色彩，起到画龙点晴的作用。