Question

12．现在环境污染尤其是空气污染越来越严重，近年来我国多地出现雾霾（smog）天气，更引发了人们对环境污染的关注．请你围绕环境保护这一主题，谈谈家乡存在什么环境问题，作为中学生该如何保护环境．
要求：1 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范．
2词数80-100．
It's important to protect the environment．
                                                                       

Answer 1

分析 高分句型分析：
高分句型一：
①As a student，we should do ②what we can③to protect the environment．作为一个学生，我们应该尽我们所能来保护环境．
①as介词"作为"．
②what引导的宾语从句作do的宾语；
③动词不定式作目的状语．
高分句型二：
We can①turn off the lights ②when it's ③bright enough in the room．当房间里足够明亮时，我们可以把灯关掉．
①turn off固定短语"关闭"
②when引导的时间状语从句
③enough修饰形容词或副词时，应置于形容词或副词的后面，此处指"足够明亮"．

解答 It's important to protect the environment．
   Now pollution is getting worse and worse，especially air pollution．So more and more people start to realize the importance of environment．
   In my hometown，Qiqihar，the air is not very fresh and we often feel uncomfortable．It's unpleasant for us to work and study．It's our duty to protect the environment．【家乡存在的环境问题】
   As a student，we should do what we can to protect the environment．【高分句型一】We can drive less and take the bus to school or walk to school．We can reuse the paper and try not to throw the rubbish away．We can turn off the lights when it's bright enough in the room．【高分句型二】
   In a word，we should try our best to protect the environment．We can have a beautiful world【作为中学生该如何保护环境】

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．写作时，要先确定好时态，再注意谓语动词形式的变化．另外，还需要使用一些句型和短语，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．