Question

【题目】暑假快到了，同学们都在议论着假期的计划。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍几位同学和你自己的想法。

注意：1.词数80字左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

Many of my classmates are discussing the summer vocation plans. Anna

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Answer 1

【答案】The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. Some are in favor of staying at home. Anna want to do voluntary work for the old. She would like to make new friends.Peter thinks it is better to travel in order to relax himself and learn about culture there.However, he will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.Kelly would like to visit his grandma in the hometown.He also wants to cook himself.

In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如have a discussion，what to do，during the holiday，in favor of，would like to do，in order to，In my opinion，stay at home，such as等。而Peter thinks it is better to travel in order to relax himself and learn about culture there./ In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home for I can do what I like / I will be happy if I can be a member of your club.等多种从句结构的运用更是为文章增色不少。