Question

【题目】短文改错。

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When the accident was happened, I was standing near a bus stop. There I saw an old lady waiting a bus with her umbrella. The bus soon arrived. There were too many passengers hurried to get on it that the old lady didn’t get on. A driver closed the door without looking careful and drove away. Unluckily, the old lady’s umbrella was caught by the door. He shouted to the driver but he didn’t hear. The bus pulled her along the road. Finally, she fall to the ground. Several minutes late, the ambulance(救护车) came and took her to hospital. I thought that was the driver who should be responsible for the accident.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】去掉happened前的was

【2】waiting后加for

【3】too→ so

【4】hurried→ hurrying

【5】driver前的A→ The

【6】careful→ carefully

【7】He→ She

【8】fall→ fell

【9】late→ later

【10】that→ it/在that后面加it

【解析】

【1】去掉happened前的was happen没有被动语态。

【2】waiting后加for 动词wait是不及物动词，接宾语时要加for。

【3】too→ so 此处的so …that…构成结果状语从句。

【4】hurried→ hurrying hurrying修饰passengers表示“着急上车的乘客”。

【5】driver前的A→ The 定冠词the表示特指，文中特指“司机”。

【6】careful→ carefully 修饰动词用副词。

【7】He→ She 文中是the old lady向司机大喊，所以人称代词要用she。

【8】fall→ fell 文中时态是过去时，前后要保持一致。

【9】late→ later 句意：几分钟以后，救护车来了，并把她送到了医院。late表示“晚的”，later表示“后来”。

【10】that→ it/在that后面加it It is+被强调部分+that构成强调句型。或者是把that作为宾语从句的连接词，宾语从句是个强调句，再在后面加it。