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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore, I couldn’ t understand " real music". After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. l will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. There I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my the first guitar teacher. It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model. Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】learn→ learning

【2】Therefore→ However

【3】at→ from

【4】started→ start

【5】all→ both

【6】that→ which

【7】去掉the

【8】choose前加to

【9】model→ models

【10】importantly→ important

【解析】

【1】learn→ learning 根据spend sth (in) doing sth结构，应将learn改为learning。

【2】Therefore→ However 我花了十多年的时间学习小提琴，却不能理解什么是“真正的音乐” 。上下文之间存在转折关系，且有逗号隔开，应使用副词However。

【3】at→ from 介词from才是graduate的习惯搭配，graduate from意为“从…毕业” 。

【4】started→ start 动词suggest表示“建议” 之意时，其后的宾语从句要用“should+动词原形” 表示虚拟，should可以省略。

【5】all→ both 不定代词的逻辑错误。all表示三者或三者以上。我和我的朋友，只有两个人，应改为we both（我们俩都）。

【6】that→ which “介词+which” 引导定语从句，on which在从句中作时间状语，相当于when。

【7】去掉the 前有物主代词my，则序数词前无需定冠词the。

【8】choose前加to It takes sb some time to do sth是固定句型，表示“某人做某事需要花费多少时间” ，其中it是形式主语，不定式短语是真正的主语。

【9】model→ models several（几个，若干）后接名词复数。

【10】importantly→ important 形容词修饰名词，故应将importantly改为important。