Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是李华，你的笔友Peter最近染上了吸烟的坏习惯，请你写一封邮件对他进行劝告。内容包含以下两个方面：

1. 吸烟的危害；

2. 提出建议。

注意：1. 词数：100词左右；

2. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；

3. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

I am sorry to hear that you have fallen into the habit of smoking.____________________

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Looking forward to your good news.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I am sorry to hear that you have fallen into the habit of smoking. In my opinion, you’d better give it up as soon as possible.

The reason why you quit smoking is that smoking is a major contributing factor to many diseases. It does not only damage to your health but also harm to the non-smokers around you. What’s more, smoking is a waste of money and may even cause fires.

Here are the ways that can help you. Firstly, decide on a day to quit and be determined, but don’t choose a stressful day. Secondly, do some relaxation exercises every time you feel stressed. Thirdly, don’t be afraid to ask others for help when necessary.

Looking forward to your good news.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

书信类作文是高考的主流文体，在写作时要注意称呼的使用。如果开头已经给出，记住此部分一般不记入总词数。在书写正文的时候一定要注意：1. 判断文章应使用的人称和时态；2. 不要遗漏文中给出的要点；3. 语言要通顺流畅，简洁明了； 4. 尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式结构以增加文章的亮点，提高文章的档次；5. 恰当使用一些连词和插入语以使行文连贯，层次分明。