Question

【题目】（十一）

近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿：

有人建议

1.不浪费粮食和纸张

2.尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋

3.毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用

注意：1.不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节；

2.词数：120字左右，开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数；

3.参考词汇：方便筷disposable chopsticks

Recently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society”in our school.

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy-saving society”in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions.

Some students suggest that we shouldn’t waste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good condition, not be thrown but recycled

Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.

【解析】

试题分析：分析要求可知，短文应该用一般现在时，使用第一人称和第三人称。词数120左右，不要太多或太少。尽量多使用较高级的词汇和短语以及固定句式，注意句子之间的连贯性。作文打分重点关注文体，篇章结构，语言表达的连贯性和地道性。

【亮点说明】 文中用了一些高级的短语和句式。如：are highly concerned about 、suggest和recommend之后的从句使用了虚拟语气、which引导的定语从句等都很不错。