Question

请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。

         Failure is annoying, but what failure can teach us may never be taught in other ways．

注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

②除诗歌外，文体不限；

③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；

④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

⑤词数为120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

No one can ever achieve any success without failure as failure can usually help us learn what our strengths and weaknesses are.

When I was in Junior High School, most of my teachers and students thought it better to study science, saying that it promised a better future. I tried to follow this trend despite the fact that I was not good at Physics. It was only two months later, when I failed an extremely important Physics exam, that I realized my talent lay in subjects like Chinese, English as well as History. I switched for arts immediately.

   The following years witnessed my excellent school performance then. So failure is not as terrible as we have expected as long as we can learn something from it.

【解析】

试题分析： 本文开放性作文，给出一个话题，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。这种类型的作文，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，选择句式时要赋予变化，才能更好的驾驭。同时要选择适当的连接词，在叙事的同时充分表达个人观点，注意时态人称保持一致。用高级词汇来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】 本文用了一些较出彩的句型结构如  think it adj for sb to do sth  It was only two months later, when I failed an extremely important Physics exam, that I realized my talent lay in subjects like Chinese, English as well as History,。不仅用强调句话来表达，还加入插入语，提升整个文章的难度，又突出句型运用的灵活性。

When I was in Junior High School, most of my teachers and students thought it better to study science, saying that it promised a better future此句中还运用非谓语动词的形式，句子通畅连贯。还运用高级词汇如performance,terrible , expect ,extremely 提升句子亮点。

考点： 开放式作文