Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之问交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Once a man got on a bus for New York. He hid in toilet, because he did not want to pay. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, "There's a bum(流浪汉) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver." The message was passing from person to person. But anywhere along the way, it changed. The bus driver was told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came to, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. This soon caused a 15-miles-long traffic jam. Under the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb!

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】in-in the

【2】her-him

【3】say-said

【4】passing-pass

【5】anywhere-somewhere

【6】immediate-immediately

【7】去掉to

【8】or-and

【9】miles-long-- mile-long

【10】Under-With

【解析】

【1】in-in the考察冠词。本句the特指“卫生间”。

【2】her-him考察人称代词。文章前后人称要一致。

【3】say-said考察时态。文中的时态是过去式。

【4】passing-pass考察时态。句意：信息从一个人传到另一个人那里。

【5】anywhere-somewhere考察不定代词。anywhere用于否定句或疑问句中，而somewhere用于肯定句中。

【6】immediate-immediately 考察副词。句意：他立即停了车并打电话报了警。

【7】去掉to考察介词。came本身有副词的含义其后不需接介词to。

【8】or-and 考察连词。句意：警察告诉乘客下车并远离。

【9】miles-long-- mile-long考察名词的单复数。句意：很快造成了长达15米的交通堵塞。

【10】Under-With考察介词。with the help of …是固定搭配“在…的帮助下”。