Question

作为即将进入高三的学生，将要面对更繁重的学习和生活压力，因此，保持积极心态非常重要。现在，请围绕“积极心态与健康、学习、交友及家庭生活"四个方面的关系，以Keeping a Positive Attitude为题目，写一篇英语短文，阐述你的观点及理由。

注意：1．词数：120字左右；。

2．短文题目已给出，并不计入总词数。

Keeping ,a Positive Attitude

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Keeping a Positive Attitude

　　How times flies! It won't be long before we are in Senior 3, when we will be faced with more learning tasks and heavier pressure. Therefore, it's crucial and necessary that we keep a positive attitude both in our study and daily life

　　Keeping a positive attitude does us a lot of good. First of all, it can help us stay healthy physically. Meanwhile, it's also beneficial to our study, for we can usually learn much more effectively when keeping a positive attitude. Besides,it's easier for us to make more friends and get on better with our family if we keep a positive attitude.

　　Now that a positive attitude can bring so much happiness to us, why not try our best to keep it as much as we can in spite of everything?

【解析】

试题分析：本文的话题是如何在健康，学习，交友及家庭生活四个方面保持积极的心态，写作中注意围绕要点组织材料，确定写作内容。写作中注意将“积极心态与健康、学习、交友及家庭生活"四个方面的关系介绍清楚。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。建议信作文的关键在于表达方式的选择和要点的完备，不能有遗漏或者省略。提出建议要切实可行，要符合英语习惯，所以在写作的时候要变换句式，要写得更为亲切直白。

【亮点说明】使用了非谓语动词短语：Keeping a positive attitude does us a lot of good. it's easier for us to make more friends and get on better with our family if we keep a positive attitude.

使用从句：Now that a positive attitude can bring so much happiness to us, why not try our best to keep it as much as we can in spite of everything? 使用了较好的插入语：Therefore，First of all, Meanwhile, Besides,

考点：提纲类作文