Question

14．假如伦敦奥运会组委会正在向全世界招聘奥运会志愿者．条件如下：
    1．有热情为他人服务的思想；
    2．有丰富的文化知识，既能做好服务工作，也能传播文化；
    3．有流利的英语表达能力和良好的沟通能力．
    假如你是李华，你想申请成为一名奥运会志愿者．请根据以上要求，写一封申请信．
注意：
    1．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
    2．词数120 左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Sir or Madam，
    I am grateful to you for reading my letter of application．With the 2012 London Olympic Games drawing near，        ．
     I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply．
 Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：What's more，I can speak fluent English，which enables me to communicate with people smoothly．更重要的是，我能说流利的英语，使我能够与人们顺利交流．本句中what's more，是一个插入语起到了承上启下的作用，which引导的是非限制性定语从句，which指代前面整个句子的意思．
 高分句型二：As a consequence，I will value it a great deal and do whatever I can if I could be accepted to be a volunteer．因此，我将非常珍视它，而且做我能做的任事情来成为志愿者．句中whatever I can 是一个宾语从句，其中if引导的是一个条件状语从句．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
     I am grateful to you for reading my letter of application．With the 2012 London Olympic Games drawing near，it is my honor to apply for the position of a volunter．The reasons as follows will account for my being suitable for it．【阐明意图】
     It is this special event that I have been expecting for a long time．First of all，I can serve all the guestsfrom all over the world heart and soul．Besides，I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history，so that I can do the work well and spread the Chinese culture．What's more，I can speak fluent English，which enables me to communicate with people smoothly（高分句型一）．As a consequence，I will value it a great deal and dowhatever I can if I could be accepted to be a volunteer（高分句型二）．【提出条件】
     I would appreciate it if you could give me an early reply．【寄予希望】

点评 这是一篇申请信，开头和结尾已经给出，不存在格式问题．信的要点也已经给出，要求学生就相关要点写一些自己的特长或者优势，虽然与生活接近，但是在内容的构建上也存在一定的难度，如何才能博得委员会的欣赏也考验着学生的句子组织能力．