Question

5．假定你是李华，在参加北京外国大学自主招生考试（BFSU's pre-test）期间，于3月2日入住一家宾馆606房间，3月6日退房．你回家后发现把一个中等大小蓝色皮背包遗失在那里，内有几本备考书籍，一个红色限量版ipod，和一张信用卡．现请用英文给该宾馆经理写一封信，请他/她帮忙寻找并寄回．
信件要点包括：
•陈述写信原因
•简要描述该背包
•说明其重要性
•期待回复并表示感谢
注意：
1．词数100左右．
2．信件格式已为你给出．
Dear Sir or Madam，
       ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I'm so grateful for your good service during my stay for BFSU'pre-test，but I'm writing to ask a favour to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel．
高分句型二：
 I'll appreciate it very much if you can give me your reply and thank you for anything you can do for me．
句型一 which I left in your hotel．该句是一个由which引导的定语从句，which在句中充当宾语，替代前面出现的先行词pack
句型二 I'll appreciate it very much if you can give me 该句是考查了it作形式宾语的用法，appreciate后面使用it作形式宾语，真正的宾语是if引导的从句

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
   I'm so grateful for your good service during my stay for BFSU'pre-test，but I'm writing to ask a favour to find and send back my pack which I left in your hotel．（高分句型一）（写信意图）
   I checked in on Mar，2 and out on Mar.6．Setting off in a rush for the station，I left the pack in Room 606．It's a middle-sized，blue，leather backpack which contains several books that are wanted in reviewing NMET，a red ipod of special edition as well as a credit card．（描述物品）All in the pack matters to me，especially the ipad is precious gift from my father on my 18th birthday．So much do I cherish it that I feel upset for the loss．
   If you find it，would you please post it to me？The return address is on the envelope．
   I'll appreciate it very much if you can give me your reply and thank you for anything you can do for me．（高分句型二）
 Yours sincerely，
Li hua

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．