Question

假如你是李华，上个星期你们班里就“低碳”生活方式进行了积极的讨论。请你用英语为校园网站写篇短文，介绍以下讨论结果：

1. 节约水电2. 垃圾分类处理3. 少用纸巾4. 骑自行车或乘坐公交车。

注意：1. 开头已经写好，不计入总词数； 2. 适当增加细节，词数在100-120左右

参考词汇：低碳 low carbon  纸巾 tissue

 

Answer 1

【答案】

How to live a low carbon life.

Our class had a hot discussion on low carbon green lifestyle last week.We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the internet. Meanwhile, save and recycle used water . Besides, rubbish should be sorted out , which will surely also benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using less tissues or using handkerchiefs instead so as to protect our environment. More importantly, to contribute to a cleaner and greener world, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice when we go out. Only by the ways above can we live a low cabon green life.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇文字提示类作文，话题是我们大家非常熟悉的环保低碳。考生有话可说，有理可表达。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化，尤其是数字的不同表达法。

考点：提纲类写作

点评：本文属于文字提示类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。