Question

【题目】为配合你市开展的“创建文明城市”活动，用英语写一篇短文倡议同学们做个文明的好学生。

【写作内容】

活动目的：配合“创建文明城市”活动 活动对象：全校学生 活动内容：衣着整洁 使用礼貌用语(谢谢、请等)，不说脏话 乐于助人 注重言行，公共场所不大声说笑 与别人建立良好的关系 遵守交通规则、在公交车上主动为老人及带小孩的乘客让座 保持环境卫生

参考词汇：文明城市 civilized city

【写作要求】

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

In order to play a supporting role in building a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well inside and outside of school. It’s good-mannered to say “Thank you”, “Please” and so on, and never say dirty words. And wherever we are, it’s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy, and not throw litter or spit around so as to protect the environment. Be friendly to others, always ready to help the people in need and not talk loudly in public, which is really helpful for us to establish a good relationship with others. Besides, we should also obey traffic rules and give our seats to the old and people with babies when taking a bus.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为任务型作文，要求写一篇倡议书。写作要点要求明确，且要求只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地使用5个句子完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：it为形式主语“It’s good-mannered to say “Thank you”, “Please” and so on, and never say dirty words.”；状语从句“wherever we are,”；定语从句“which is really helpful for us to establish a good relationship with others.”总之，该文可称之为：短小精悍！