增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出修改后的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。修改：在错词后划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in

greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until

the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I

still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates.

As result, the hurt in my foot became worse. Now I know I was wrong.

We can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can

not help others in return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily

and peacefully.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The burden of students have been a hot topic for years, but the load of parents has received few attention, especially from their own children.  

The picture shows us a touched moment when a little girl comes to greet her working mom. Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work, the girl helps to remove the bag from his shoulder.

All this reminds me of my mother whom has been doing whatever she can to let me to have the best. But totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to that my mother needs and always think studying well is only thing I can do in return. Now I know I can do my bit to help my mother with everyday washing, bedroom cleaning, or at least preparing breakfast myself, so as to share her daily burden. The picture has convinced me that it is even much important to be a good daughter than a "good" student.