书面表达

目前中学生出国非常火爆，很多家长也为此不惜代价；请你谈谈你对这种现象的看法，是先上完高中打好基础再出国好，还是趁早出去好。(120字左右)

分析下面的书面表达，指出其中的错误．

　　目前中学生出国学习的现象非常火爆，很多家长也为此不惜代价；请你谈谈你对这种现象的看法，是先上完高中打好基础再出国好，还是趁早出去好．

　　At present, in order to let their children receive better education, some parents send their children abroad to study. This results in that (1) more and more students want to go to (2) abroad to study without finishing their study in the middle school. In my own (3) opinion, I think it is not necessary to go abroad so early.

　　First, the education system and teaching methods are different with (4) ours. I doubt whether you can learn normally abroad. Besides, the cost is very expensive (5) in foreign countries. Since you can not earn enough money by yourself, you have to ask your parents for money. On the other hand, your (6) knowledge is limited for you haven't finished middle school yet. It is not worth spending so much money to study abroad.

　　I suggested (7) to students that they finish middle school and then go to university in their own country. After graduation, you (8) can go abroad to make a further study. That will be much better.

假定你是李雷。你在美国某城市学习期间，发现所在的城市面临严重的交通拥堵。面对这种情况，你以一个留学生的名义向当地政府提出一些合理化的建议，以缓解现在的拥堵状况。词数：120左右。提示如下：

参考词汇：市区税：congestion charge

Dear Sirs,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Lei

假定你是李雷。你在美国某城市学习期间，发现所在的城市面临严重的交通拥堵。面对这种情况，你以一个留学生的名义向当地政府提出一些合理化的建议，以缓解现在的拥堵状况。词数：120左右。提示如下：