短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

 

Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved.  

I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.

 

 

I heard many parents complaining that their teenage children are rebelling. I wish it were so. At your age you ought to be growing away from your parents. You should be learning to stand on your own two feet. But take a good look at the present rebellion. It seems that teenagers are taking the same way of showing that they disagree with their parents. Instead of striking out boldly on their own, most of them are clutching (紧握) at one another’s hands for reassurance.
They claim they want to dress as they please. But they all wear the same clothes. They set off in new directions in music. But somehow they all end up huddled (聚在一起) round listening to the same record. Their reason for thinking or acting in thus-and-such a way is that the crowd is doing it. They have come out of their cocoon (蚕茧) into a larger cocoon.
It has become harder and harder for a teenager to stand up against the popularity wave and to go his or her own way. Industry has firmly carved out a teenage market. These days every teenager can learn from the advertisements what a teenager should have and be. And many of today’s parents have come to award high marks for the popularity of their children. All this adds up to a great barrier for the teenager who wants to find his or her own path.
But the barrier is worth climbing over. The path is worth following. You may want to listen to classical music instead of going to a party. You may want to collect rocks when everyone else is collecting records. You may have some thoughts that you don’t care to share at once with your classmates. Well, go to it. Find yourself. Be yourself. Popularity will come — with the people who respect you for who you are. That is the only kind of popularity that really counts.
【小题1】 In this passage, the author wants to tell _______.

A．teenagers to try to pursue their real selves

B．readers to try to be popular with people around

C．parents to try to control and guide their children

D．people to try to understand and respect each other

【小题2】The author disapproves of rebelling teenagers _______.

A．growing away from their parents	B．following the popularity trend
C．walking a new way on their own	D．turning to their friends for help

【小题3】The phrase “ larger cocoon” at the end of the second paragraph refers to _______.

A．the distractive and variable society	B．the dazzling music world
C．the parental care and love	D．the popularity wave in the society

【小题4】What does the author think of advertisements?

A．Convincing.	B．Instructive.
C．Influential.	D．Authoritative.

【小题5】According to the author, what might happen when a teenager stands up against the popularity wave and follows his/her own path?

A．He/She falls behind the time.	B．He/She loses good friends.
C．He/She faces all kinds of criticism.	D．He/She gains valuable popularity.

I was feeling a little blue because my mother had been laid off from her job and she had lots of bills to pay. It left me wondering what was going to happen to us now.

I got off the college shuttle bus and started walking. That’s  36  I heard piano music and singing rising above the noise of the people and the traffic. I walked a little slower so that I could 37   where it was coming from.   38   the crowd I saw a young lady sitting at a piano with a carriage next to her. She was singing songs about love, keeping on trying, and not underestimating (低估) the power within yourself. The way she was singing    39   me a bit. I stood there watching her play for about fifteen minutes, thinking that it must      40   to perform alone in the middle of a crowded place.

She must have felt my   41   because she would  42 look in my direction. Then I walked over and put some  43     in her carriage and she said, “Thank you”. Instead of continuing my way home, I said to her, “I have been  44     a rough time lately, but you’ve made me  45 again.”

“I’m happy that I could help,” she replied. “Why are you so sad?”

“Well, my mum told me she had got    46   from her job, and that made me sad. I’m not so sure what to do …”

“You see, here’s the problem,” she explained. “While you were        47   , your head was down. Don’t look  48 , because  49   comes in different ways and if your head were down, you might lose it.”

She also explained to me that she saw a lot of  50 people in the world and she tried to bring more  51 by sharing motivational (鼓舞人心的) music. She told me that when she wasn’t making music she studied  52  . So, that was how she knew some of the things she was telling me.

I  53     a little wider because I knew that she was doing a good thing. So, after we  54, my heart was  55      and lightened by a musical soul!

1.                A．where         B．why            C．which    D．when

 

2.                A．turn out        B．take in          C．find out   D．get in

 

3.                A．Across         B．Through        C．Between  D．Above

 

4.                A．comforted      B．annoyed        C．scared   D．reminded

 

5.                A．take time       B．take turns       C．take action    D．take courage

 

6.                A．absence        B．performance     C．presence D．regret

 

7.                A．angrily         B．occasionally     C．generally D．faithfully

 

8.                A．cards          B．food           C．books    D．money

 

9.                A．going through    B．getting up       C．taking over    D．running towards

 

10.               A．curious         B．eager          C．sad   D．hopeful

 

11.               A．hired          B．promoted       C．paid  D．fired

 

12.               A．running        B．driving         C．walking    D．riding

 

13.               A．proud          B．defeated       C．absorbed  D．puzzled

 

14.               A．opportunity     B．trouble         C．difficulty   D．dream

 

15.               A．positive        B．active          C．energetic  D．negative

 

16.               A．records        B．poverty        C．positivity  D．indifference

 

17.               A．politics         B．psychology      C．biology    D．art

 

18.               A．smiled         B．changed        C．influenced D．sighed

 

19.               A．responded      B．parted         C．agreed    D．understood

 

20.               A．hit            B．sunk           C．tied  D．touched

 

 

请阅读下面几种假日集训班的信息：

A. You’ll spend half of each day learning different types of dance. The teachers will give you lots of tips and advice as well as help you find your own dance style to impress your friends.

B. This course is for those who are interested in making films. You and your group will be able to choose what type of film to make. You’ll become a film crew(全体人员) and create your own film ready to show to everyone else. What’s more, you’ll have your film on DVD to take home with you, too!

C. Football players at this club will experience fun and dynamic training, which aims to improve their all-round football skills. It doesn’t matter how good you are as we will normally try and put you in a group with others of a similar level.

D. Our Learner Driver holiday means that when it comes to having lessons and taking your test, you will be well ahead of the crowd. You’ll experience 30 minutes of driving each day as will as theory.

E. Our coaches will make sure you cover all the surfing basics (基础). Before you know it you’ll be getting up and riding. We promise you’ll never forget the feeling you get when you catch your first wave!

F. We will show you how to create music of different styles and then record your own professional quality tracks (录音) on CDs to take home for your friends and listen to. You don’t even need to be able to play an instrument or have any musical knowledge to get involved.

请阅读下面人物信息，并为他们选择合适的项目：

1.Mary lives far away from her office, and it takes her long time to get there every day. Recently, she has been thinking about buying a car, but she wants to get training before she buys it.

2.Laura loves music very much. She often says that she cannot be separated from her iPod. Although she doesn’t know how to play an instrument, she wants to create her own music.

3.Louis is a middle school student; he likes to spend his spare time on the playground. He used to watch others play football because he is not very good at it. He wants to attend a training course to improve his skills.

4.Wang Ling is a college student who likes to dance. She wants to take part in a party next week, so she wants to learn some new moves to try out on the dance floor.

5.Star is a freshman. He is an English Major, but he likes photography very much. He and his roommates often go out to take photos. They plan to go on an outing during the summer holiday to make their own film.

 

短文改错

My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday.There were lots of visitors stood in front of the

ticket window.We waited a long time and buy three tickets.In the Tiger Mountain of the park，I

was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd.

Unfortunate，I got separated from my parents.I had hard time looking for him，but I had no

luck.Wandering in the park，I felt alone without any companions.Worse still，I had no money，so

I had to walk home，covered as much as 5 kilometers.