在下面的短文中只有10处错误，请找出，多出的（从第11处起）不给分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余词用（﹨）划掉

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词

Half a year before I went abroad for further study.   I received a lot of present. All were wrapped in color paper.  Among them were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buy me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different countries in them. My brother gave me a note, which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” While I  hurried into my bedroom, I found a box in it. Open  the box, I got a pocket computer. I was very glad. I understood these two presents would help me using body language to communicate people and improve my English.       

在下面的短文中只有10处错误，请找出，多出的（从第11处起）不给分。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词

删除：把多余词用（﹨）划掉

修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下写出修改后的词

Half a year before I went abroad for further study． I received a lot of present．All were wrapped in color paper．Among them were two presents which were really interested me．My sister buy me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different countries in them．My brother gave me a note, which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” While I  hurried into my bedroom, I found a box in it．Open  the box, I got a pocket computer．I was very glad．I understood these two presents would help me using body language to communicate people and improve my English．      

下面的短文中共有10处语言错误，请你在错误的地方增加、删除或个性某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
删除：在多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Last Saturday the students of our class made a bike trip of Wanping, a small town by the Taihu Lake. We set off earlier in the morning. After getting to the town, we had visited some places of interest. At noon, we had picnic near the lake. Everybody was attracted with the beautiful scenery and we took a lot of picture. In the afternoon, some of them went fishing, some flew kites, and the others rowed boats on the water. We both had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trio fir us, during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help. We have learned to help, understand and sharing with others. In a word, we have got quite a lot from it.

下面的短文中共有10处语言错误，请你在错误的地方增加、删除或个性某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

删除：在多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Last Saturday the students of our class made a bike trip of Wanping, a small town by the Taihu Lake. We set off earlier in the morning. After getting to the town, we had visited some places of interest. At noon, we had picnic near the lake. Everybody was attracted with the beautiful scenery and we took a lot of picture. In the afternoon, some of them went fishing, some flew kites, and the others rowed boats on the water. We both had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trio fir us, during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help. We have learned to help, understand and sharing with others. In a word, we have got quite a lot from it.