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5] Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city. On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly, Li Hua 【查看更多】

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作用出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意：原行没有错的不要改。

Dear Editor,
I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had	1．________
about whether a entrance fee should be charged for parks．	2．________
Opinions are dividing on the question．60％of the students	3．________
are against with the idea of entrance fees．They believe a	4．________
public park should free of charge．People need a place	5．________
where they can rest and enjoy themselves there．Charging	6．________
entrance fees will not doubt keep some people away．On the	7．________
other hand, 400/00 thinks that fees should be charged because	8．________
you need money to pay workers, and buy plants and young	9．________
trees．They suggest, therefore, fees should be charged low．	10．________
Yours truly,
Li Hua

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写作.

你班同学开展了一场"司机醉驾是否应该处罚乘客"的讨论.请你根据下表提供的信息,给报社写一封信,介绍讨论的情况,并发表你的看法.

少数同学赞成处罚乘客	大多数同学反对处罚乘客
1.减少交通事故,促进交通安全
2.不乘坐醉酒司机的车,不仅是对自己负责,也是对司机和路人负责	1.乘客难以判断司机是否醉酒
3.即使乘客知道司机饮酒,如果司机不听从乘客的劝诫,处罚乘客是不公平的
你的看法

【写作要求】
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2．首句已经给出,不计入总句数.
Dear Editor,
     I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
                                                                                                                        Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                              Li Hua

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基础写作

        你班同学开展了一场"司机醉驾是否应该处罚乘客"的讨论.请你根据下表提供的信息, 给报社写一封信, 介绍讨论的情况, 并发表你的看法.
     ［写作内容］

           少数同学赞成处罚乘客              大多数同学反对处罚乘客

1.减少交通事故,促进交通安全
2. 不乘坐醉酒司机的车,不仅是对自己负责, 也是对司机和路人负责 1.乘客难以判断司机是否醉酒
2. 即使乘客知道司机饮酒, 如果司机不听从乘客的劝诫, 处罚乘客是不公平的

你的看法......
     ［写作要求］只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；开头已为你写好,不计入句子总数.
     ［评分标准］句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯.

Dear Editor,
     I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether passengers who ride in a car
driven by a drunken driver should be punished.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
                                                                                                                      Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                             Li Hua

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你班同学开展了一场“司机醉驾是否应该处罚乘客”的讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，介绍讨论的情况，并发表你的看法。

少数同学赞成处罚乘客

大多数同学反对处罚乘客

1. 减少交通事故，促进交通安全

2. 不乘坐醉酒司机的车，不仅是对自己负责,也是对司机和路人负责

1. 乘客难以判断司机是否醉酒；

2. 即使乘客知道司机饮酒，如果司机不听从乘客的劝诫，处罚乘客是不公平的。

你的看法

[写作要求]

1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2. 首句已经给出，不计入总句数。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.

。。。。。。

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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Ⅳ写作(共两节，满分40分)
基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分)
[写作内容]
你班同学开展了一场“司机醉驾是否应该处罚乘客”的讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，介绍讨论的情况，并发表你的看法。

少数同学赞成处罚乘客	大多数同学反对处罚乘客
1. 减少交通事故，促进交通安全 2. 不乘坐醉酒司机的车，不仅是对自己负责,也是对司机和路人负责	1. 乘客难以判断司机是否醉酒； 2. 即使乘客知道司机饮酒，如果司机不听从乘客的劝诫，处罚乘客是不公平的。
你的看法

[写作要求]
1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；
2. 首句已经给出，不计入总句数。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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