假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你的同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下写出应该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Jennifer considers me like a friend to talk, laugh, and do things with her. She believes that I am a friend she can depend in time of need. I was watering the flowers in the garden this morning when she drops in, telling me that she needed my help because I was in low spirits. When asking what made her so unhappy, Jennifer told me her friend Tina was reading her diary the other days when she entered the classroom. She was too angry at the time that she shouted at her, which, of course, ended their friend. Having heard what she said, I said, "We shall never have friends unless we expect to find them without faults."

完形填空（共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分）

阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

I grew up poor－living with my wonderful mother. We had little money, but plenty of love and attention. I was   21   and energetic. I understood that no matter how poor a person was, he could still   22   a dream.

   My dream was   23  . By the time I was sixteen, I started playing baseball. I could throw a ninety-mile-per-hour fastball and   24   anything that moved on the football field. I was also   25  : My high school coach was John, who not only believed in me, but also taught me   26   to believe in myself. He   27   me the difference between having a dream and remaining true to that dream. One particular   28   with Coach John changed my life forever.

   A friend recommended me for a summer job. This meant a chance for money in my pocket－money for a new bike, new clothes and the   29   of savings for a house for my mother. Then I realized I would have to   30   up summer baseball to handle the work schedule, and that meant I would have to tell John I wouldn’t be playing.

   When I told John, he was   31   as I expected him to be. “You have your whole life to work, ”He said. “Your   32   days are limited. You can’t afford to waste them. ”I stood before him with my head   33  , trying to think of the   34   that would explain to him why my dream of buying my mom a house and having money in my pocket was worth facing his   35   in me.

   “How much are you going to make at this job, son? ”He asked. “3.5 dollars an hour, ”I replied.

   “Well, ”he asked, “is $3.5 an hour the price of a dream? ”

   That simple question made   36   for me the difference between   37   something right now and having a   38  . I decided myself to play sports that summer and the next year I was   39   by the Pittsburgh Pirates to play baseball, and was   40   a $20,000 contract（agreement）. In 1999, I bought my mother the house of my dream!

A. happy             B. polite                C. shy              D. honest

A. live              B. afford               C. make              D. need

A. athletics         B. music            C. business          D. money

A. kick              B. play             C. pass              D. hit

A. right              B. popular          C. lucky             D. confident

A. how               B. why              C. when              D. whether

A. gave              B. taught               C. brought           D. asked

A. accident           B. matter               C. problem           D. experience

A. keep               B. end              C. give              D. pick

A. mad               B. mournful         C. frightened            D. shameful

A. living            B. playing          C. working           D. learning

A. moving        B. nodding          C. shaking           D. hanging

A. answers           B. excuses          C. words             D. ways

A. sadness           B. regret               C. hopelessness      D. disappointment

A. direct            B. clear            C. straight          D. bare

A. wanting           B. changing         C. dreaming          D. enjoying

A. wish              B. goal             C. score             D. desire

A. fired              B. accompanied      C. avoided           D. hired

A. paid              B. got              C. offered           D. presented

完形填空（共20小题，每小题1.5分，满分30分）

阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D)中，可以填入空白处的最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

Although my father wasn’t a doctor, he made his own brand of “house calls”. I followed him as he    46    a plate of my mother’s home cooking to an elderly man named Frank    47    all major holidays, and when Frank was    48   . As far as I know, their only    49    was that Frank was an occasional    50    at Dad’s small gas station. Frank’s home was a two-room house on the rough side of town with a rotten front porch(门廊) that you could fall through if you weren’t    51   . Through his caring    52   , my father was teaching me to be a doctor,    53    neither of us knew it at the time.

    When I was 13, my father    54    lung cancer. He brought home a    55    the doctor drew showing    56    his cancer was and told me that he was going to    57   .

    The big green oxygen tank with plastic tubing    58    a central feature of our living room next to his easy chair. Several months passed and his condition    59   . He asked me to    60     my mother when he was gone. He said, “I love you, son.” That night he died.

    When you’re 13 and your father dies, you have some    61    to make. You can use the circumstance as a (n)    62     for letting your behavior and grades go down the drain, or you can honor his memory and try to do something    63    with yourself. I    64    my energy on my school work and my goal of becoming a    65   .  .

A. lent     B. brought           C. bought         D. showed   

A. for         B. in                C. at             D. on      

A. happy    B. well              C. sick           D. homesick    

A. function B. connection        C. information       D. instruction  

A. patient      B. doctor            C. customer       D. passenger  

A. careful     B. strong            C. reasonable     D. punctual    

A. words    B. attitude          C. attention      D. appearance  

A. and       B. because        C. although       D. as      

A. developed B. found             C. constructed       D. recovered   

A. photo    B. picture           C. report         D. film     

A. where    B. how            C. which          D. what    

A. rest     B. retire            C. die        D. leave     

A. decorated B. remained          C. equipped       D. became   

A. worsened B. decreased         C. increased      D. bettered   

A. take care of B. make friends with C. make up for        D. look into  

A. mistakes B. friends           C. choices    D. changes    

A. reason      B. guide             C. cause          D. excuse     

A. positive    B. active            C. productive     D. motive    

A. attracted   B. consumed          C. focused    D. depended   

A. doctor       B. driver             C. teacher    D. nurse 

第三节：完形填空（共20小题；每小题1.5分,满分30分）
阅读下面短文,从短文后所给各题的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中,选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项,并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
It seems as if cell phone could be the protection that parents expecting the kids to have freedom and be safe have been looking for. Let's  41  your 11-year-old son is going on a long bike ride with a friend, so they take along your cell phone   42  they need help. Not only could they call you if necessary, but  43 Global Positioning Systems (GPS) equipped on many mobile phones today, your son and his friend could also be  44 easily. Plus, with an additional service, you could track the boys'  45 location. Or consider this: If your daughter is  46  herself and three friends to a concert, she could  47 out exactly how to locate the concert location and get back home by using her equipped cell phone.And through a(n)  48  software package,you could   49  her whereabouts (行踪).
  50 tracking devices as we all consider useful, however, have  51 .If the boys urgently needed help during the ride,  52 might be too late by the time someone found them. And if they wanted to, the concert-going girls could deviate (偏离) from the  53 route and go to a night club after the  54 -they could turn off the phone or leave it in their own car and drive with someone else.
Cell phones and their accompanying programs are tools for   55 children safely today, but all of them are  56  extremely reliable. Under no circumstances does  57 else replace a well-established parent-child relationship  58  love and trust.
If you do decide to let your kids use these devices, don't rely  59 on them for protection. Your children need you watching them－  60  will never take the place of your time, attention, eyes, and ears when overseeing your child's whereabouts.
41.A. pretend                  B. see                         C. prove                     D. say
42.A. even if                   B. only if                   C. in case                    D. so that
43.A. with                       B. as                          C. also                        D. for
44.A. called                     B. observed                C. contacted                D. located
45.A. obvious                  B. clear                      C. exact                      D. safe
46.A. leading                   B. driving                   C. heading                  D. guiding
47.A. map                       B. make                     C. work                      D. get
48.A. additional               B. universal                C. another                  D. exceptional
49.A. learn                      B. know                     C. follow                   D. search
50.A. These                     B. Such                      C. Some                     D. Few
51.A. faults                     B. shortcomings          C. difficulties              D. disadvantages
52.A. parents                   B. it                           C. policemen               D. we
53.A. considered              B. established              C. located                   D. planned
54.A. drive                      B. ride                       C. show                      D. party
55.A. guaranteeing           B. providing               C. caring                    D. parenting
56.A. never                     B. always                   C. usually                   D. merely
57.A. everything              B. nothing                  C. anything                 D. something
58.A. relied on                B. based on                 C. laid on                   D. kept on
59.A. specifically            B. believably              C. only                       D. particularly
60.A. relationship            B. cell phone              C. protection               D. technology

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　A very young new officer was at a railway station. 

　　He Was on his way visit to his mother in another town.  76．_______________

　　And he wanted to telephone to her the time of his train,  77．_______________

　　so that she should meet him at the station in her car.     78．_______________

　　He looked in all his pocket, but found that he did not    79．_______________

　　have the right money for the phone. So he went out 

　　and looked round for anyone to help him.               80．_______________

　　At last he stopped an old soldier passed by，and          81．_______________

　　said, “Have you got any change for ten pence?” 

　　“Wait a moment，”the soldier says，“Let me have a look.” 82．_______________

　　“Don’t you know what to speak to an officer?”the         83．_______________

　　officer said angry.“Now start again. Have you got         84．_______________

　　any change for ten pence?”“No sir, ” the old soldier

answered quickly.                                      85．_______________