Question

【题目】【内蒙古呼和浩特市2015年中考英语试题】初级写作：(满分15分)

假如你是某中学的学生会主席王东,为了配合环保教育主题活动,请根据下面所给提示,用英语写一封倡议书，内容包括：

1. 环保措施和美化城市的措施（各2条）；

2. 你的希望。

注意：

1. 注意文章的整体连贯；

2. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

3. 80词左右。

Dear friends,

In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should ______________________

____________________________________________________________________________

Thank you!

Wang Dong

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear friends,

In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should do what we can to protect it. First, we should plant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful. Also, always remember not to throw rubbish or pour waste water everywhere. As we all know, water is becoming less and less. So it’s quite necessary to save water. For example, turn the tap off after washing. Last, but not the least, we’d better ride a bike or walk when going out instead of driving a car.

In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner!

Thank you.

Wang Dong

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇环保的倡议书。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：we should ...，So it’s quite necessary to...，we’d better....，if everyone tries his best to...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用连词使文章前后连贯，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，适当的补充一些保护环境的措施。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了倡议书的目的是保护环境，接下来介绍保护环境的措施：种树、不要乱扔垃圾、节约用水，骑自行车或步行外出，最后阐述自己的观点，要尽力保护环境。此处remember not to do sth, as we all know, turn off, had better, try one’s best to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。