Question

2．现在网络越来越发达，中学生上网的利弊已成为人们讨论的焦点．请参考下面的信息并结合自己的观点写一篇60-80词的短文谈谈你的看法．

Pros	Cons
课后放松	长时间上网有害健康
辅助学习	沉迷网络游戏，不思学业
传递信息快捷，开拓视野	不良网站，误导学子
网络交流，交友…	虚拟网络，真假难辨…

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They can get the information that they need quickly from the Internet他们可以快速的从网络上获取想要的信息．
that引导的定语从句，修饰information．
【高分句型二】
①In my opinion，②whether it is good to use the Internet depends on ourselves依我看来，使用电脑是否有益取决于我们自己．
①in one's opinion依某人看来．
②从句作为主语，谓语动词用单数．

解答 Today the Internet develops more and more quickly．People have different opinions on the influence to students．
          Some people think the Internet is good for the students．The students are tired in school and the Internet can make them relax．They can also learn more knowledge from the Internet．They can get the information that they need quickly from the Internet．【高分句型一】It makes the students learn more in the world．What's more，the students can make friends and chat with each other on the Internet．This can help them grow up better．（利）
         However，some people think the Internet is bad for the students．They think the children spend too much time on it and it's bad for their health．If the children always play it，they don't want to study any more．Some bad websites lead the students to know the bad things．Besides，the Internet is not true．The students are so young that they can't tell which is right or wrong．（弊）
 In my opinion，whether it is good to use the Internet depends on ourselves．【高分句型二】We can spare some time to search the important information online．When we are tired，the music and films on the Internet can also make us relaxed．It's up to you，my friends．（我的观点）

点评 写作要抓住要点．要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．