Question

书面表达（共计10分）

人生只有经历蜕变， 才能展现更优秀的自己。蜕变是人生前进的一个过程。假如你们学校要举办主题为“你成长过程中经历的一次蜕变”的英语演讲比赛， 请根据以下提示，写一篇60---80词的演讲稿。演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示：1.变化前后的表现；

2.促使你变化的主要原因；

3.你为此变化付出的努力。

A big change

Hello, everyone. I’d like to tell you something about a big change in my life.

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That’s all. Thanks for your listening!

Answer 1

A big change

Hello, everyone. I’d like to tell you something about a big change in my life.In the primary school, I didn't do well in English , and was scared of speaking English . But I entered middle school , a big change took place . With the help of Miss. Li ,I started to like English , and read many interesting English stories . Miss.Li was patient with me ,so I studied hard in class and practice English by watching English movies and listened to English songs after class . Little by little , my English imporved .Now I dare to speak English in public can get high scores in every exam. That's all , thanks for your listening !

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求以“你成长过程中经历的一次蜕变”为主题，根据所给提示，为演讲比赛写一篇60---80词的演讲稿。演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。并且要求要求符合语法，语言通顺，大小写正确。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据要求写出自己变化前后的表现：变化前I didn't do well in English , and was scared of speaking English变化后started to like English , and read many interesting English stories .写出促使自己变化的主要原因With the help of Miss. Li。并且Miss.Li was patient with me ，并写出了自己为此变化付出的努力I studied hard in class and practice English by watching English movies and listened to English songs after class . 并且得到了好的结果Little by little , my English imporved .Now I dare to speak English in public can get high scores in every exam. 这篇作文写得很不错，符合要求。

考点:日常生活类作文。